New Review! The Girl is Mine - Part One by Eve Cates, 3 Cranky Stars

That Girl is Mine - Part One by Eve Cates
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

3 Cranky Stars!



Author Eve Cates is a talented story teller with the ability to draw you into a story and leave you wanting more. "That Girl is Mine - Part One" is a very short novella and I query the decision to not combine Parts One and Two into a fuller work.



In Part One, Avery moves to LA with her long time boyfriend Josh. The two are deeply in love and Avery puts her schooling and own dreams on hold to help Josh with his dream.



Josh, fresh out of Medical School, is doing his residency at a children's hospital. There is no denying his feelings for Avery and vice versa, but Josh's work load strains the relationship.



The couple moves in with Josh's long time friend, Dylan, so they can get on their feet. All is well until Avery and Dylan start spending more time together. Starting out as friends, the two move into dangerous territory after a heated kiss.



The story line is intriguing, pulling you in, but ends rather abruptly.



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