That Girl is Mine - Part Two by Eve Cates
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
3 Cranky Stars!
That Girl is Mine, Part Two, continues on directly from Part One.
Avery is confused and feeling guilty about the kiss she shared with Dylan. She knows she has undeniable feelings for Dylan, yet she is still very much in love with Josh.
Things between Josh and Avery cool down while everything with Dylan becomes an addiction. They don't want to hurt Josh but at this point it is inevitable.
After a trip home to New York to visit her mom she finally makes a decision only to be stuck in a sticky situation when Josh declares he found an apartment and they're moving out.
I am not opposed to cliffhangers, novellas, short stories et al. I really do feel, however, that this story lost its tension and character development due to its brevity. It made it difficult to connect with the characters and understand their motivations. As stated in the review of Part One, I think this story would have been better if both stories were combined because the reader would have more continuity.
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