New Review! Falling Awake by Kristoffer Gair 3 Cranky Stars

Falling Awake by Kristoffer Gair
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

3 CRANKY STARS


This is a story that has been rewritten with some minor changes, mainly name changes. The original was published under the pseudonym Kage Alan. It is a story about; I am not really sure what it is about. It starts out as a man suddenly awakes in a strange place he does not recognize. It looks like an airport. In fact, he does not really know who he is or anything about his past. He has the feeling that there are other people around, but no one seems to notice him. Finally, he gets to his feet and starts walking around, looking for some help. He suddenly finds himself in a diner where a waitress acts as if she knows him. Casually, others walk into the diner and sit with him. He does not know them, but he feels they know him.


The rest of the story is these people telling stories about incidents in their pasts. It gets confusing at this point. They do not tell him who he is and what they want but they want him to go to the gate on his boarding pass. They seem to think the stories are important. I was so confused at this point; I was glad it did not take long to read. Thus the 3-star rating, it was just too complicated and did not make any sense. I prefer a story with more action.


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